Lacey sat at the edge of the pool. She watches as her friends splash and play in the water. She longs to feel the coolness of the water against her sun warmed skin. Needs to float on her back and feel weightless. But she can not. She hasn't been able to go swimming-- anywhere-- not just in a pool, since the accident.
She closes her eyes. In her minds eye, she sees the bright red floaties that Jasmine always wore laying on the chair next to her. She remembers the confusion she felt as she realized that Jas had just been there. Lacey had only turned away for a moment. Had only spent 2 minutes talking to her friend from school.
She jumped out of her chair and started looking for Jas. Hoping that she was simply playing hide-and-seek like she always did. Her stomach tightens with fear. Please tell her that Jas didn't jump into the pool. Of course she wouldn't do that. Mom has told her over and over that she has to wear the floaties until she can swim on her own.
Lacey runs to the edge of the pool. Looks down. And there she sees Jas at the bottom. Her gorgeous blonde hair floating around her like a halo.
Lacey screams for help then dives in to get her baby sister. Grabs Jas by the arm and drags her through the water. When she surfaces, there is a lifeguard standing by ready to help lift Jas out of the water.
The lifeguard hoists Jas's lifeless body onto the sidewalk and begins CPR immediately. Lacey climbs out of the pool and watches, tears in her eyes, as this man attempts to bring Jas back to life.
She looks at Jas. Her small body limp. Her crystal blue eyes closed. Her little red lips now colored a pale shade of blue.
Paramedics arrive and take over for the lifeguard. Jas is still not breathing. They get her on a stretcher and move to the ambulance. Lacey has gathered up their things and sits in the front of the truck. She fishes out her cell and calls their Mom.
"Mom?! Mom it's me, Lacey. No. Everything isn't alright. Jas jumped into the pool without her floaties on. She was right by me... I turned to talk to Beth... Turned back and she was gone... No. They're doing CPR now... We're headed to the hospital... Mom! Mom? Please stop... Mom just meet us at the hospital, OK?!"
Lacey closes up her phone. This can not be happening.
They reach the hospital and rush Jas back to a room. Lacey isn't allowed back there. The last she heard things were still bad.
She walks through the doors to the waiting room where her Mom is. She listens as her mother screams at her about how irresponsible she is. How she will never be forgiven if something happens to Jas...
A nurse rushes through the door. "Mrs. Greene? Mrs. Greene, we need you to come back and sign some papers. These papers are to give us permission to..."
Her mom is walking with the nurse as the she talks. Lacey doesn't catch the whole conversation.
A loud splash and a scream bring Lacey back to the present. She opens her eyes, tears streaming down her face. She focuses her attention in the direction of the scream.
Two sisters playing in the water. Splashing and dunking each other. One little and blonde wearing bright red floaties. Just like her sister. Just like Jas.
She closes her eyes. In her minds eye, she sees the bright red floaties that Jasmine always wore laying on the chair next to her. She remembers the confusion she felt as she realized that Jas had just been there. Lacey had only turned away for a moment. Had only spent 2 minutes talking to her friend from school.
She jumped out of her chair and started looking for Jas. Hoping that she was simply playing hide-and-seek like she always did. Her stomach tightens with fear. Please tell her that Jas didn't jump into the pool. Of course she wouldn't do that. Mom has told her over and over that she has to wear the floaties until she can swim on her own.
Lacey runs to the edge of the pool. Looks down. And there she sees Jas at the bottom. Her gorgeous blonde hair floating around her like a halo.
Lacey screams for help then dives in to get her baby sister. Grabs Jas by the arm and drags her through the water. When she surfaces, there is a lifeguard standing by ready to help lift Jas out of the water.
The lifeguard hoists Jas's lifeless body onto the sidewalk and begins CPR immediately. Lacey climbs out of the pool and watches, tears in her eyes, as this man attempts to bring Jas back to life.
She looks at Jas. Her small body limp. Her crystal blue eyes closed. Her little red lips now colored a pale shade of blue.
Paramedics arrive and take over for the lifeguard. Jas is still not breathing. They get her on a stretcher and move to the ambulance. Lacey has gathered up their things and sits in the front of the truck. She fishes out her cell and calls their Mom.
"Mom?! Mom it's me, Lacey. No. Everything isn't alright. Jas jumped into the pool without her floaties on. She was right by me... I turned to talk to Beth... Turned back and she was gone... No. They're doing CPR now... We're headed to the hospital... Mom! Mom? Please stop... Mom just meet us at the hospital, OK?!"
Lacey closes up her phone. This can not be happening.
They reach the hospital and rush Jas back to a room. Lacey isn't allowed back there. The last she heard things were still bad.
She walks through the doors to the waiting room where her Mom is. She listens as her mother screams at her about how irresponsible she is. How she will never be forgiven if something happens to Jas...
A nurse rushes through the door. "Mrs. Greene? Mrs. Greene, we need you to come back and sign some papers. These papers are to give us permission to..."
Her mom is walking with the nurse as the she talks. Lacey doesn't catch the whole conversation.
A loud splash and a scream bring Lacey back to the present. She opens her eyes, tears streaming down her face. She focuses her attention in the direction of the scream.
Two sisters playing in the water. Splashing and dunking each other. One little and blonde wearing bright red floaties. Just like her sister. Just like Jas.
This post linked with The Red Dress Club. Inspired by the prompt "Water gives life. It also takes it away." Constructive criticism is welcomed and appreciated!
@amyplus1x3 · 734 weeks ago
Stasha 77p · 734 weeks ago
I had a really hard time deciding how I wanted to go with this prompt.
I waited until the last minute to even start writing and almost didn't write anything.
I guess I work better under pressure.
Mel · 734 weeks ago
Stasha 77p · 734 weeks ago
I had to dust off my fiction writing skills for this one.
AmyLynn · 734 weeks ago
that is all
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Stasha 77p · 734 weeks ago
I appreciate you stopping by!
Oka · 734 weeks ago
Stasha 77p · 734 weeks ago
I was trying to leave the reader questioning if Jas survived or not. But I don't think it went that way.
Mad Woman · 734 weeks ago
Stasha 77p · 734 weeks ago
It took me forever to get into a zone with this one. I started over a dozen different times til I ended up with what is here.
kriswehrmeister 57p · 734 weeks ago
So proud of you!
Very nice.
Stasha 77p · 734 weeks ago
Thank you!
I told you once before that if not for your gentle pushing, I would not be stepping out of that comfort zone.
So it's all your fault that I am being all creative and stuff over here.
Hee hee!
Haven · 734 weeks ago
Stasha 77p · 734 weeks ago
I wasn't aiming for the dark side, it just kind of went there. I think it needed a little dark to help get the point across.
Shell · 734 weeks ago
Stasha 77p · 734 weeks ago
Thank you!
I really struggled with this. I had 3 ideas for stories floating around in my head. I finally settled on this one. Seems like it turned out pretty well.
Mandyland · 734 weeks ago
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Stasha 77p · 734 weeks ago
That is the part I could definitely identify with. Being a mom and knowing how upset I'd be if something happened to my child. Lacey knows that her mom is just yelling to be yelling but she still feels guilty about everything that happened. It was out of her control but it wasn't either.
Renee · 734 weeks ago
Good writing. I was panicking with her as she searched for her sister.
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Stasha 77p · 734 weeks ago
Thanks for stopping by!
I worried that I didn't portray the panic like I needed to. I am glad to see that others felt her panic as well.
Mandy · 734 weeks ago
Lovely work :)
Stasha 77p · 734 weeks ago
Thank you for stopping by!
I wanted that suspense. I wanted to make you wonder. I wanted you to wonder about that sweet little girl...
Ami · 734 weeks ago
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Stasha 77p · 734 weeks ago
Thanks for stopping by!
I struggled so much with this. I had several different story ideas floating around in my head. When I was finally able to center on one idea, this story is what was produced. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
ash · 734 weeks ago